Jo’s Abstract Noun Poem
the poem was good, and filled with imagery. the feeling that i get when i read this poem is , that you are a fugitive and you're running from the truth. and you've finally realized that you can't outrun the truth. you just want to be normal and have a joyous life like the people around you.
the only suggestion to make it better is in the third stanza in the line”I would rather be the saver not the hurter”for the word saver you could have put savior and the word hurter could be replaced with the villain.
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