bragging rap

yo my name is hailey
i am making up these raps daily
your name must be failey
i ant heard any your raps lately

you think your so cool
but your just being a fool
i cant fill the hole
the s posed to be your brain fool

 so now that you'v been told
can i go home before i grow to old
i am starting to get cold
fool

poetry responce 4

        Jo’s Abstract Noun Poem

the poem was good, and filled with imagery. the feeling that i get when i read this poem is , that you are a fugitive and you're running  from the truth. and you've finally realized  that you can't outrun the truth. you just want to be normal and have a joyous life like the people around you.

the only suggestion to make it better is in the third stanza in the line”I would rather be the saver not the hurter”for the word saver you could have put savior and the word hurter could be replaced with the villain.

Limericks

 Limericks

there once was a girl named sally

she lived in a  dark ally

one day she went out

and walked about

there  she met mr. o'malley

there once was a pink flower

it changed colors every hour

their one day

to my dismay

it lost its beautiful power

there once was a tree

which was always saturated in pee

it has moss growing

and leafs a  flowing

and one day it was cut down by mr.lee