Wednesday 24 April 2013

poem responce 3

                                                                               
this poem has lots of great rhymes and repetition. shel silverstein is truly a great poet and can internally rhyme and in my opinion is very hard as well as getting to a point where it makes sense and is well written and fun this poem where the sidewalk ends by shel silverstein is about how he knows where the sidewalk ends and how bad it is everywhere else because it is not the same. some examples are the line when he writes “Let us leave this place where the smoke blows black “as well as “And the dark street winds and bends”. and so concludes my response☻

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1 comment:

  1. Definitely need to see more specific examples with much more commentary. Put more attention on capitalization and punctuation.

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